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Old 30-03-2006, 04:31 AM
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not bad and still can be improved...

the island setup is a bit too centre but as the ozelot. grows it will be better.
The lines of two branches are somehow too straight[left one too tall]...so you have be clever in using the narrow leaf to cover up this flaw if possible
The right side top is empty...use your needle leaf here...

i still think can be improved...

shoot a straight on angle... this angle a bit too high.

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